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From joheriks@abo.fi:

A fine attempt, though the smog is unrealistic (try media next time) and the skyscrapers need more detail and/or irregularities.
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From helene.dumur@free.fr:
the cars don't look like cars...

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From rich@brickbots.com:
Good concept, but the devil is in the details.  More sophisticated modeling, a more interesting negative space for the sky and a lot more variation on the headlights (with light cones!) would really help to complete this picture.  I know you wanted to give the cars a feeling of being stuck in traffic, but you can do this with density and still make it less orderly.  The headlights march back in a very orderly progression.  

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From hildurka@simnet.is:
Nice concept but I find this image a little bit too 
unfinished. The headlights donīt shine through the fog as 
I would be expecting. 

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From dungbeatle@mail.tds.net:
Buildings are cute. The fog looks too dense to me. The car headlights look a bit strange. Seems like too many lanes?
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From sshelby@shelbyvision.com:

I find this kind of a humorous image, I guess because it's so =
exaggerated. I'm just glad I don't live there!


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From simon_smith@zen.co.uk:
A good, 'cartoony' interpretation of fog. Clever.

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From file:
nice interpretation of theme.  a bit more smog than fog, maybe, but effective.  cars might be too evenly dispersed, and headlights are too sharp through the fog, and too similar.